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Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2013 08:12 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
This was one of the first stories of yours I read (when you first started writing it, so I didn't know anything about you or your writing style etc and it was for this reason I didn't continue reading, as there was something about how Brian was written that I didn't like.
It was only when you added the post-epilogue chapters that I twigged it was you who'd written it (as at first I just ignored it and then forgot it existed) and I decided to re-read it, seeing as I loved the other stories of yours I've read. And I am glad I did. It felt a bit rushed (maybe because I read pretty much all of it in one go) and I was expecting there to be more BDSM (seeing as you seem to like dark!Brian) but overall I liked it. (I very much like chapters 17/18.)
Oh, and just to let you know, I don't often re-read stories once I've decided I don't like them for whatever reason, so take it as the compliment it is that I love your writing so much, I re-read this.
Author's Response: First of all, I would really like to thank you for giving it another shot - especially if it wasn't really your thing to begin with. That means a great deal to me.
Undoubtedly yes, I do love Dark!Brian, probably why I write him as such so often. I don't really perceive him as dark as I write him, but in the particular premises I place him, I think it fits more than it would in canon. Of course I do see darkness in him at times even in canon... but not to the degree I write him. I never intended for the BDSM to get too heavy; I just wanted them to explore their mutual needs there, but eventually evolve to a loving relationship where that wasn't what all that definied them. I hope when I wrap it up I succeed in doing that.
Again, thank you again for giving this a try. I do try to warn everyone throughout many of my stories that the premise might not be for everyone. I realize this is definitely one of those. Thank you so much for your comment. That feedback both motivates and encourages me. :) *Hugss*
Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2013 05:32 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
This story is amazingly hot! I didn't know much about Dom and Sub relationship before, so you taught me a lot of things. I think it's so unusual! I loved it, thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: Thank you, dear. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. This one is a bit different... but I am so glad I came back to visit them in this world. I do hope you enjoy the last part - at least I think it will be the last part. Haha.
Thanks for commenting! *Hugss*
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2013 07:24 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
Justin’s hell-day continues! :) This post-epilogue thing is so hot and funny, I just can’t get enough of it!
I love how Brian, even during the important presentation, seems to be unable to keep his eyes off Justin. I wonder how he works at all, having his beautiful partner always at an arm length. But God, what a bastard!.. Hitting that button even before the client was out the door, in front of everyone! If I were Justin, I would definitely want to kill him :)
I still think Brian is too hard on Justin, but this Josh is a real asshole. And a disgusting and stupid one, too! What the hell was wrong with him?? He came to Brian’s house, realized that Brian is a dominant and Justin is submissive, and then what? He thought he could fuck Justin right here, and Brian would be okay with it? Perverted logic, really. He is lucky to be still breathing. And though I always knew Brian was very jealous, I never expected just how much. It was a pleasant surprise :) Can’t help it – I *love* seeing him jealous. But he was also scared, and that’s not the good thing. I still wonder if we will see Josh, and what repercussions this event may have – though I doubt this will happen, considering there is only one part left, and it’s still day, not the night that promises to be magnificent for our hot couple. Post-epilogue is so, I don’t know – relaxing, I can feel so much domesticity while reading – in Brian and Justin very special way, of course. It’s just what I need to get my mind off those boring time-consuming things. Great work!
Thank you! I can’t wait for that incredible night!
Author's Response: I must say this is a guilty pleasure for me returning to this special world. I hadn't realized how much I missed it until I returned. I guess since it's only mid-day Brian will have to take it easy with his button pushing if we can do the day and night in one more chapter. I probably could have made it two, but decided it would only be a 3 part post-epilogue.
I think Brian is being a bit harsh with Justin, but again, he was warned repeatedly about this Josh. He should have taken Brian's warnings more to heart. I know he was trying to help Brian get a new client, but he should know that Brian couldn't care less about a new client for Kinnetik when Justin was at risk. He should remember their trip to New York and how Brian handled Leo Brown disrespecting Justin. Anyways, I doubt we'll catch a glimpse of Josh in this story. In the event it ever continued, or a sequel like some are requesting I could see Josh as being involved. We'll just have to see how the many muses in my head operates. Haha. And without a doubt - I love Jealous!Brian. He is such fun and immensely hot in those moments. There is nothing like him then.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, my friend. I am hoping the rest of the day and night will be one they long remember. Thanks so much for commenting! *Hugss*
Reviewer: MeganElisabeth (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2013 05:08 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
I have to say that I completely agree with ANDROMEDA. This is such an incredible story and the only good current BDSM B/J out there. You should definitely rethink the idea of a sequel in the future! (: I LOVE that Brian only wanted to do it when he could see Justin feeling the toturous pleasure through the click of a button. Loooveeedd the hot blow job I completely see Justin loving it just as much if not MORE than Brian! Cannot wait for the big long night that is undoubtedly going to be a scorching hot night of hot hot sex. Brian wouldn't have it any other way after going so long without his sunshine. :P
M.
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear! I am so incredibly flattered that this story has been favored so much by the BDSM Brian & Justin readers. That really means a lot to me. I try not to make it too overwhelming, but a world that would fit into their lifes - when and how they choose. I do think this is a 'verse that could be returned to again and again. There are quite a few possibilities in such a world. I think it important to show that Brian isn't a Dom that seeks to humiliate/degrade his Sub, but one that loves him and just wants what's best for him. At least, that is the image I try to effect. Regarding the night coming up - yes I think it will be long and hot... for both of them.
Thanks so much for your comment. I appreciate that so much! *Hugss*
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2013 01:42 AM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
tehehehehe, I love this. i really love how open they are with each other, and the blow job was HOT ;)
Author's Response: These two in this world really seem to know what the other needs. I am having such fun visiting with them again. I'm glad you are too!
Thanks so much for commenting, hun. *Hugss*
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 04:56 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
Very hot chapter my friend ;) I love how you've presented the aspects of the Dom/sub relationship so realistically. I can't wait to see what Brian has in store for our little Sunshine....it's sure to be a deliciously welcome torture.
more soon please~JP
Author's Response: Thank you, Sweetie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think these two take hot to a new level in such a world as this. It's a good balance that they have found here... but I think they each yearn to have that more present in their lives than they have been recently. Perhaps Justin's bad decision brought it more to the forefront. I'm sure it will be a long and frenzied night for both of them. :)
Thanks for commenting, hun. *Hugss*
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 03:59 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
Yep! You did mention 2 or 3 chapters. But I tend to forget/ignore unpleasant news!!!! I didn't even realised you had already written the second post epilogue chapter....
NOOOOOOOO!!!! Please say it's not the end....Or I will start a petition (LOL)!!!!! You can't do that to us that's the only good BDSM B/J story out here!!!!
Author's Response: Hmmmmm. Is this is case of me saying - flattery will get you everywhere!?! Haha. Seriously though, thank you so much for that high praise. That you enjoy this particular story so much really means a great deal to me. I really had a hard time laying this one to rest back when I did. It was probably inevitable that I returned to them here. We'll have to see, though. When I first looked at this story again I debated on doing a sequel instead, but went with a post-epilogue format. Probably to keep myself to just a few added chapters! LOL.
Your comment quite made my day. Thank you so much for that, my friend. *Hugsss*
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 03:56 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. More as soon as I can. Thanks for commenting!! :) *Hugss*
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2013 09:49 AM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 2
What only one more chapter? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I want more!!!! I want more!!! Pretty please? You can't stop there!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
Author's Response: Well I did say 2 or 3 parts when I opened this back up. They do say all things must end... right!? But... we'll have to see. I'm really glad you're enjoying this, hun. Thanks for your comment! *Hugsss*
Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2013 09:07 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 1
I didn't read this story, so I read only the last chapter. It was hot! I blushed so many times!:-) I can't wait to start reading it from the beginning. I hope when I reach the end, there will be more new chapters! Thanks!
Author's Response: Well, I do hope you enjoy it. This one is a bit different, but one I really enjoyed writing. So much so that I had to return. It will probably only have 2 or 3 more chapters added in all. Thanks for commenting. *Hugss*
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2013 09:22 AM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 1
I can't tell you how thrilled I am that you have decided to revisit this story. I absolutely loved this story the first three times I read it (don't judge me lol) and now I have even more reason to do so.
It's always exciting to see the boys exploring this aspect of their relationship, and I for one can't wait for more :) JP
Author's Response: I won't even tell you how many times I have revisited this story - even if only in my mind. I have few regrets on how I have ended stories, but this one I did regret ending as quickly as I did. I couldn't resist a revisit any longer. So, don't feel bad!! :)
I think it was good that they evolved to keeping that part of their lives private and at home... but I also think certain circumstances could arise to push our dominant to the breaking point. It appears we reached that here. I hope it will be a fun and exciting return. More of this as quickly as I can. Thanks for commenting, Sweetie. *Hugsss*
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 07:57 PM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 1
Oh, what a fantastic, wonderful surprise! I just *love* this great, unusual story, I enjoyed reading it the first, the second and the third time, and now, by adding this new chapter, you have only intensified my desire to read it once again. Like a drug, really :) I love the way you wrote it – I don’t how much time you spent learning about all BDSM things, but I think you’ve described everything beautifully! It is indeed unusual and maybe not everyone, but I’m madly in love with such plots. In fact, this story helped me a lot to realize some things about myself, and for that I’ll always be grateful.
The idea you chose for continuation is terrific, I’m already crazy about it! :) Jealous Brian is fantastic, especially in these circumstances – I think he should tread softly, because he is balancing on the edge. It’s very important in this kind of relationship to know where to stop, like you’ve mentioned, but now Brian is so angry that he almost loses control. I myself couldn’t figure what to think of his behaviour in the beginning of the chapter. I’m still not sure how much Justin is to blame for it – yeah, he should have listened to Brian’s warnings, but well, it is very well known by now how jealous Brian is, so it’s would be like him to exaggerate. I wouldn’t have thought, either, that just by agreeing to accompany someone I could be attacked. I guess it was just a coincidence. I’m surprised that Brian didn’t kill that Josh – that man was probably saved only thanks to Justin, who was much more important for Brian in that moment.
OMG, what an interesting gift! I never expected something like that :) Ahh, I *love* our hot couple, they are just mind-blowing to me. I’m so glad you decided to come back to this universe for a while – I can’t wait to see what you came up with. I wonder if the story with Josh is over, or maybe he’ll be back rather soon. Ha, I can’t imagine how Justin will spend his day now! Really, that’s too cruel even for Brian! :) Something extremely embarrassing can happen! Can’t wait to see :)
The chapter was super-hot, I’m *so* looking forward to the next one! Thank you so much for visiting this fantastic story one more time!
Author's Response: This story has been on my mind so much recently, I just had to make a return visit - even if briefly. I researched a bit into the BDSM world, but I know I am not as in touch with it as I should be for this... but I am trying to make it realistic in how it would fit in not only their lives, but how they have agreed to express it together.
Well... surprise, surprise, who knew I love a Jealous!Brian. Haha. I just can't seem to help myself there. Brian backed away briefly because his control was still shaky. I can only imagine the evening they had, leading to separate sleeping arrangements and the ride into the office. I quiver thinking of the glares Justin received. Not too wise of our Sunshine to barge into his office unannounced on such a day... but I don't think he was thinking clearly either. More than likely, Brian probably overreacted a bit... then again, we don't know much about this Josh character. One thing was apparent - Brian seemed to know and understand that man very well. Perhaps he had good reason to be so upset. I wouldn't be surprised if we see Josh again... but we'll have to see about that. I think depending on the circumstances that could be very interesting.
I do feel for Justin for the remainder of this day. I have no doubt that Brian will use that button often... and probably not always at the most appropriate of times. I think it will be almost as unsettling for him as well, and their day definitely won't be ending with separate bedrooms.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I really look forward to checking in with them again soon. Thanks so much for your comments, my friend. *Hugsss*
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 11:02 AM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 1
So happy you came back to this. Great story to wake up to. Doing happy dance. Please update soon. Continuing this workday would be wonderful, and hot.
Author's Response: I really missed this world. I had to finally give in and write what has been rattling around in my head. This should be a long and exciting day for both of them... not to mention the night.
More as soon as I can. Thanks for commenting! *Hugss*
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 09:17 AM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 1
What a great surprise! I love this story! thank you!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, hun. I'm so glad I could surprise and entertain you yet again. It's so good to know. I just had to return to this world. I could write this story forever... but probably just a few chapters this time.
Thanks so much for commenting. *Hugss*
Reviewer: MeganElisabeth (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2013 06:12 AM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 1
I read this story awhile ago and absolutely fell in love with it. I was so surprised and excited to see that you decided to revisit it! :D I have read pretty much all B/J stories with BDSM characteristics, (mainly series), but only one had Justin as the submissive. I really really liked that Brian helped Justin explore this side of himself and be the man to bring his underlying desires to life. In turn, Justin helped Brian expand on his feelings of the never before desire to claim ownership or the possibility of falling in love. This is an all around great story and I'm really glad to see that you decided to give at least a few more chapters! Maybe someday you'll feel the need to revisit it again in the future.. maybe it will never end? :P lol. I loved the torturous act Brian has planned for Justin. It is definitely going to bring them even closer, not to mention the night of heated passion that will come from the boiling desire they will each have built up by the end of the day!
M.
Author's Response: Thank you. I really ended this story far more prematurely than I'd ever intended. Circumstances just dictated that I limit myself then. Coming back to them here has been in my thoughts for a long time. Finally, I just couldn't resist it. I think it normal that they often return to a dom/sub role in their lives. Essentially, that is who they are in this story, and despite other factors present in their lives now I think it is who they will always be. I have tried to limit this to just three chapters - all surrounding the incident that led to them taking a quick sudden return to that lifestyle in a work and home setting. They had already evolved to keeping that exclusively at home... but circumstances changed that here. In truth, I could write this story forever... but everything needs a cutting off point, I guess. :) For sure it will be a long day for Justin... I think for Brian as well as he watches the effects on Justin. I'm very glad you enjoyed the return. I look forward to working on the rest of this one.
Thanks so much for commenting! *Hugss*
Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2013 02:45 AM · On: Post Epilogue - Part 1
hehehehe! what a thrilling surprise to see this updated!!!
Author's Response: This particular bunny has been thumping around in my head for a long while. Finally I had to let it out! I hope you enjoy our brief revisit. Thanks for commenting! :) *Hugss*
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 01:03 PM · On: Epilogue
Love possessive and jealous Brian!!! Love the ending!! It was such a great story!!! thank you!!!
Author's Response: As we know I do adore possessive and jealous Brian. Probably why I write that in so often! I'm really glad you liked the ending. I probably could have written this story for much longer, but I think they ended in a good place.
Thanks so much for commenting! :) *Hugss*
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2013 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 15
Loved it, so great that they are also partners!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, hun. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks so much for commenting! :) *Hugss*
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2012 10:31 PM · On: Epilogue
I liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting! :)
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2012 06:41 PM · On: Epilogue
DARLING
THANKS FOR YOUR ANSWER I AM SO HAPPY ABOUT A NEW STORY
I REALLY LIKE A PRISON STORY WITH A DOM BRIAN AND A SUB JUSTIN WITH LOT OF PUNISHMENT OR A STORY LIKE LIFE IN PAST WICH MAN CONTOROL WOMEN IN EVERYWAY AND WOMEN HAD NOT ANY RIGHT AND CONTOROLED BY THEIR FATHER OR HUSBAND A MPREG ONE
FORGIVE ME FOR SUGEST YOU SUBHECTS DEAR:))))))))
HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Author's Response: Your welcome, hun. I'm always excited about starting a new one. In this Brian will be the warden and Justin a new prisoner. So, things will be a bit tense between them... and of course, Brian holds all the power. Hopefully you enjoy it. Your enthusiasm is always good to see. :) I will begin posting as soon as I can.
*Hugssss*
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 04:23 AM · On: Epilogue
Sorry I should have added congratulations on the Blue Ribbon also. It is so well deserved.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you again, I appreciate that. Those ribbons make me feel like I really accomplished something.
*Hugsss*
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 04:14 AM · On: Epilogue
Congratulations another fic with 200 reviews and so well deserved. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you, hun. I am so thrilled this story was so well received. For me it was definitely worth a return visit. Thanks so much for commenting. *Hugsss*
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2012 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
great story
thank you for sharing
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 11:06 PM · On: Epilogue
great story
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting! :)
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2012 03:35 PM · On: Epilogue
DEAR
I HOPE YOU FINISH ALL OF YOUR BEAUTIFUL STORIES AND START A NEW ONE
I REALLY LIKE A JEALOUS AND OVERPROTECTIVE BRIAN
THANKS
Author's Response: No worries, Lili. I always finish my stories. It just takes longer than I'd like sometimes. I do have a couple of ideas in mind for more stories, but I want to finish at least one or two of the others first. One that has been bouncing around in my head is a prison story. You can let me know what you think about that. Haha.
Thanks for the message, dear. Your support means very much to me.
*Hugsss*
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