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Queer as Folk fan fiction - Brian and Justin
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Reviews For Ted’s Twins
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter Five – Petulant Son’s

I really like the way that Brian is trying to help Ted.
The whole story was beautifully done. It was also more realistic then most people realize. Some people just won't admit that life is not perfect and these things really do happen.
Great job.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I really appreciate your support. This was really outside of my box, but I tried to make it very realistic and I'm glad that came through.

Life is never perfect its all about how you handle what comes your way, and learning from the experience...

Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter Four - Custody and Court Battles…

This is a very well written and interesting story.
The comments about Justin are hilarious.

Author's Response:

Thanks I was having fun playing with Justin youthfulness, even in real life Randy never seems to age. ha, ha, ha

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter Five – Petulant Son’s

A most interesting orginial plot line here.  Gay twins are very common and I'd say gay twin lovers are more common than many would know about. Your story was not that far from reality actually; a very intense, emotional read.



Author's Response:

You have know idea, how much this comment means to me... I was really worried about pushed the limits too far and offending anyone.

Oh course I was slammed out on other communities, because they misinterpreted Brian's words are supporting incest... and I only meant for him to be trying to say give them some space to come to grips with what they have gone through, but be realistic... I had to rush ending it to met the challenge deadline.

Although minus all the abuse and their father... Yes I sometimes think twins are very much likely to experiment, or maybe that's just my bad girls streak... It seems with my writing the more porny it is the more emotional it is...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter Four - Custody and Court Battles…

The pictures are excellent. Looking forward to see where you go with this.



Author's Response:

Thanks I had fun searching the web for emo boys...

Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter Three - Finding Their Way Through The Dark…

This is some very intense stuff. I'm glad you were discriptive and not sexual in your writing. We can't tell sex scenes on MW between minors and adults. I do hope the story shows healing for the boys.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter Two – Daddy Dearest…

The twins are so sad. You add lots of details which is very good.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter One – Two Hearts Are Better Than One…

The plot is excellent; I just wish you had used quotation marks for spoken lines. It would be much easier to read and understand.



Author's Response:

I know I'm sorry... But I just got a Beta person; Bigj52 volunteered. Judy's proofing all my "Stuck In's" first...

So there's hope for me... I really can't see them.

Later Baby ~ Kathleen

 

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 01:11 AM · On: Chapter Three - Finding Their Way Through The Dark…

Very sad. Beautifully written.

Author's Response:

Oh thanks I really struggled with writing this... knowing I was really starting to push the limits...

So glad you like it... ~ Kathleen

TWENTY MINUTES TO GALE ON CSI-NY!!!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter Two – Daddy Dearest…

Crying and laughing. It's like reading a roller coaster.

Love the Emo Twins/Nemo Twins comment.

Author's Response:

So glad you got a kick out of the Emo~Nemo twins... ha, ha, ha

Roller coaster... Yep... hold on to your seats...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:56 AM · On: Chapter One – Two Hearts Are Better Than One…

I like this. Ted and Blake will be great dads.

Author's Response:

Yeah I think so too, its like Ted finally comes into him own... but he's also faced with the challenges of fatherhood... Blake is just a natural...

Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter One – Two Hearts Are Better Than One…

This looks very promising. I have some other reading going on but will get back to this one soon. First I'll share the love!



Author's Response:

I hope you like it, it dose get rather a deep and dark as you get into it... and I'm afraid I might turn some off...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

 

PS I'm reading Forever Your and loving it... as well as Embraced. I tend to read and write multiple fics at a time... must be the ADD...

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter One – Two Hearts Are Better Than One…

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks this is really a stretch from most of my other writing...and I should warn you it gets pretty grizzly...

Later Baby ~ Kathleen

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