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Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 11: Liberty Diner
Mikey, a whiny, immature vampire, who'd a thunk it? But immature people who don't get what they want usually cause problems for others. Can't wait! I like the growing coven family and the further details we are given on the vampire hierarchy. Love it!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: Liberty Diner
Hi, just rating your chapters. Sorry for forgettng.
Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 11: Liberty Diner
Hey JTsecrets ! I like it so far! Especially since a few of your last chapters are 'slower' in rythym and are more descriptive of the events that goes on !!! I'm curious to know if anything bad will happen to Justin, that will get Brian to be "Mad and Wild" ??? Maybe it could be cause indirectly by Michael's resentment towards Justin ??? As you see, I love drama !!! LOL! Update soon ! Jersey :))
Author's Response: I don't want to spoil the story but you will enjoy where it goes! Thanks for reviewing and kept it up for me! (sends cyber Viagria)
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 11: Liberty Diner
My friend! You wrote another wonderful chapter. I loved it! MORE MORE MORE. I love how you not only put really hot sex, but you add a very interesting plot. I look forward to reading more. I also hope you write another vampire story because this one was and is very hot. Just as long as you keep Brian as the main vampire. I can't picture Justin older than Brian. Maybe the next story, Brian can turn Justin. Maybe Brian can find out that they have had other lives together before he was turned and his soul recognizes Justin and that is why he turns him. Just ideas! I know even without my stories, you'll write excellent ones. I look forward to reading more. XOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: I believe that part of the magic of this story is how opposites attract. Brian and Justin are total opposites on several levels: human/vampire; old/young; rich/poor; businesslike/artistic; brunette/blond; quiet/chatty; top/bottom; nightwalker/daywalker; hidden/emotional; etc. The Twlight series is so good because they are such opposites too. To make them both vampires would be a very challenging write to accomplish. It cancels the the state of being opposite. I have to give it some thought. I'm very impressed with the success of this story. I went over 4000 read hits in just over 3 days so I'm certainly on to something here the readers love. Thank you for your ideas. I'm an equal opportunity thief of good ideas!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 11: Liberty Diner
Thank you readers for hitting 4015 reads in only 4 days. (does happy dance in his office) I'm so happy to have a story you like. Back to writing the next wacky chapter for your enjoyment. ~JTSecrets
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 11: Liberty Diner
loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm getting sleepy and the next chapter should be nc=30 again with B and J going at it hard core.
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