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Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Oh My God where do I even start...
First I had to email my fangirls and tell them about this fic... I told them it was the filthiest thing I have ever read; and I didn't even write it... ha, ha, ha
You know I may have competition for my crown… having been given the honorary title of Mistress Kathleen ~ Goddess of Porn…
Damn you are good… Great!!! I love that its vampires, bdsm and supernatural… Incredible… love your imagination…
Later Darling ~ Mistress Kathleen
Author's Response:
I have been down with a bad cold/flu. Sorry for taking so long to answer this comment. Girlfriend, I've read some very steamy sex scenes on fandom myself. I don't deserve a crown. Thank you for the comments and making my day. I hope the story entertains you very much. Once I get to feeling better I'll try to read your work.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Very, very hot. Sweltering really *wipes brow* I think Mikey's going to be trouble (but then again when wasn't he?). Sorry, didn 't like him in the show and I'm thinking not here either. I love it! I like the powers that each of the boys have that we are being introduced to. I like your imagination. On to the next...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
After reading ad nauseam fan fiction of Brian and Justin canon copy plots you can’t imagine my happiness to find this over the top wild story. It is so original and unique in details and the vampire Brian and slave boy Justin are too hot almost for the Internet. I have never posted a comment before but must let you know this is one hot, stimulating, story that grabs the reader making me want more of it. I have a hard time seeing this as only your second attempt at writing. Great work JT!
Author's Response: You're too kind Jane. I truly appreciate your review and hope you read and enjoy more of this novel in the making.
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
I am really enjoying this fic as I did your other. At the moment I have been very busy *winks* and hope to get through more of it very soon as I am loving every word.
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear from you again. Writing the next chapter tonight. Thanks for reviewing and rating me too.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Hi, just rating your chapters. Sorry for forgettng.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Hi, just rating your chapters. Sorry for forgettng.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Hi! I hope you are having a great day today! I'm having quite an excellent one myself. I researched presents that I want for my 25th. I just read Ch. 10 and that was ****ing hot!!!! I love that you allowed Justin to show his power by disabiling that huge bear and letting him give twinks to both Ted and Ben. Ben deserves much better than Michael. In a way, I hope Michael's stupid because I'm anti-Michael and even though it might hurt Brian, I kinda would like to see Michael get hurt! I also love how you allowed Brian to practically **** up against Justin's heart. That was really interesting. I hope that Justin stays only with Brian. I like to see only Brian with Justin. It's hotter too. I can't wait to see the vampire ball. I'm on to reading the next chapter. Talk to ya later!XOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Ahhhhh! My favorite fan never disapoints me. I'm half way through the next chapter. Some sex, some plot, more sex, stuff like that!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
oh my that was hot! the fact that michael couldn't get ben to embrace yet a twink did made it even better.
Author's Response: Michael's a very sad case; next chapter explains it. Thanks for your reviews; they mean the world to me.
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Oh my lawd. I am so feeling out of the loop; my bois have been holding out on me and I went to Theatre school:) Where does a straight girl find such yummy d*&% I am loving you. We have to be friends! More more more...
Author's Response: Heah Carlly! Glad u love the story. Shoot me an email and lets hook up. I have several fans pen pals. bob
Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Ok...there was one comment about needing a towel when reading this story. So true, and I'm a straight girl! lol Holy shit that was HOT!!! Glad Jennifer has her own vampire love now. The scene at Babylon...there are no words. :) Michael is a loser, glad Ben found someone else. Mikey just better stay away from Justin and try to hurt him or anything. If you have to put the B&J with someone else,please make only a blow job then. I know, I know it's your story. lol But I like it when it's just them. Yes I've said this before, so don't mind me. Keep up the fan-fucking-tastic writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for the sweet review. Michael is a sad case. Our boys will stick together and only a little embraced sex manic gets a taste of J. The reward will be worth it.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Ok, wow...I can't see anything topping that! tickled his heart with his dick? lol. Next thing you know Brian will be crawling up inside Justin's body, head, torso, legs and all! lol Loving this fantastical story!
Author's Response: I've seen men that hung before and men take it all. And bears who fist strive to touch the heart. It very much is possible to take one that large and touch the heart. It has to be done very slowly with a big can of Crisco. Maybe too much information but it's true. I never fisted or let anyone that big in me (stretched out for life) but it happens. Glad you love the story. There are still more vampire secrets of lovemaking to follow.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Just got a day off from school and read this story. I don't know what your smoking but I want an oz for myself. I want to be embraced with a vampire. What a life of fantastic loving that would be. Can't wait to see where you take this story. I agree with another reviewer your imagination is unreal and we benefit from it. I don't see that meny typo mistakes for the quality and quanity of writing you perform. Word 98 has problems I'm very aware of. Please don't waste time with a beta and send us more hot action vampire sex.
Author's Response: Hi George! I was afraid I lost you. Thanks for reading and reviewing. By the way that's spelled "many" not "meny." Hea look here; I can be grammer nazi too! That makes me a really be person on the web! Heheheheheheheehe!
Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Just got caught up to this story and you are really belting out some very sexy hot erotic stuff here. nobody in fandom has your imagination. Before reviewing I read the other reviews. Screw that nazi and keep us happy with more delicous vampire action. that guy would probably piss in ann rice's face. Keep up the good work with typos dude.
Author's Response: Thanks boi for the vote of confidence. I'm happy you love my work.
Reviewer: Joey (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
I liked it alot. I like the quick updates and I dont think you need a beta. Honestly I didnt notice any mistakes, its too hot to notice anything other than the hotness :)
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding. It wouldn't be fanfiction with out the odd grammer nazi showing up. I have an old Word 98 program and sometimes it misses mistakes. A beta would take days or weeks to keep with me. My last story was 189,000 words in under 30 days. That's a novel. I'm ignoring the nazi and will continue to provide rapid hot action for my fans.
Reviewer: Tay (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
I just read all the chapters and wow, so hot. I dont want them with others though, nothing could be hotter than those two together. maybe instead of that embraced guy Justin is meant to please the embraced guy could just watch Brian and Justin in action like Ben and everyone else did and then after viewing that he'll be so happy he will just let them have his blod without the screwing lol
Author's Response: blow jobs don't count as screwing in the gay world.
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