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Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
Great chapter. I'm glad that Jenn had a swooningly perfect time. Also enjoyed reading about Justin's art. Just one small nitpick, in most all prior chapters, everyone having sex are experiencing an 'organism' or 'orgasism' instead of orgasm. Most typos I overlook, but this has been consistent throughout so far, and it can really bring a reader out of the sensual haze you have created for us. Thanks for the hot read!
Author's Response: My oldr version of WORD would change the spelling automatically and I didn't catch it until recently. Thanks for telling me. Please enjoy the story.
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
that has to be the most wildest sex scene i've ever read in fiction on line. (fans herself harder and harder and harder) i felt every pentatrating word of it. far out JT!
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
orgasm, not orgasism or organism
Author's Response: You caught me allowing Word 98 to mess me up. Thanks for info.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
Hi, just rating your chapters. Sorry for forgettng.
Reviewer: carlly (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
I'm going to have to start wearing a towel reading these stories. Damn that was hot. More more more
Author's Response: Let me know what you think of the next chapter. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
Oh my god! HOT HOT HOT. You are a lovely man and I love reading your stories. I can't wait to read the next chapter. How soon can we expect it? I'm sorry for asking you all the time, but it is all your fault for making such an excellent story. I look forward to reading more. XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: type type type tonight type type type.....
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
as long as you don't get too carried away, i'm a happy camper. lucky jennifer, to have the best sex of her life.
Author's Response: I love to see your reviews! I'm not a fan of Justin/other stuff either. Poor Jennifer; she'll never be sad again in her life; doomed to be constantly smiling! The gerbil in my head is going to town on his exercise wheel and the next chapter is coming to me now.
Reviewer: Joey (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
This was another great chapter. Im disappointed that Brian wants Justin with other people, I preferred the other chapters where Justin said he didnt want to be with anyone but Brian and Brian wanted that too. I personally dont find bringing others in hot, but I can just skip those chapters. The banner is great too.
Author's Response: You don't want to skip any chapters! Each one is packed with details important to the story. If Justin lets the boy be with him it won't be significant as a sex scene but only there to bond them with Jordan and give Jordan a reason to share his blood with Brian. Don't let it put you out. Justin is totally heals over head in love with Brian and likewise. I have not plans to make detailed sex scenes with Justin or Brian with anyone else. It will only be mentioned as a small detail. Thank you for reviewing. I'm typing the next chapter now.
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