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Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
I'm glad Justin was able to allay Molly's fears that what was happening to Craig was her fault. They all get to start with a clean and luxurious slate. Hehee, Craig doesn't even realize how boxed in he really is. Great! On to the next...
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
Hi, just rating your chapters. Sorry for forgettng.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
I'm tripped out how many people are reading my story. I got some sleep and I've started the next chapter where Jennifer visits Debbie, Vic, and Rodney in the beginning.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
being a vampire and his lover and extended family does have it's perks doesn't it. oh poor craig. doesn't know what hit him yet.
Author's Response: Brian killed two birds with one stone. He helped Justin's family and at the same time protected the purple bloods. Craig is a blooming idiot without a prayer. He's stuck in jail with no knowledge what is happening; he has been isolated and seen no newscast about his case so he doesn't know how much evidence they have against him. He doesn't know Molly fingered him too and Jennifer abandoned him for it. His hell as only just begun.
Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
I'm really enjoying this story. The vampire aspect just makes it all the more hotter. I'm really hoping you keep B & J just for each other. Even though everyone will want J, I hope Brian will still not let anyone have him. Or that Justin will continue not wanting to be with anyone else either.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. What if B and J have a three way with another boy or man? Would that be ok? I need some room to keep writing wild sex scenes with.
Reviewer: Joey (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
This just kept getting better until - the mention of het sex and justin being shared. Its not like he needs to have sex with a women to reproduce theres ivf and so many ways a chick can get pregnant etc etc without having sex - its just unnecessary in my oppion. I was really getting captured into the story with all the magical stuff and I really loved the addiction Brian and Justin have for each other but the het just totally ruins it for me. Theres too many stories out there with pointless het sex in it to either get a chick pregnant or because one of them is secretly bi or straight, I guess I liked that this had so much real gay lovin etc and didnt have all the het crap in it.
Author's Response: You win. I listen to my readers. There will be no HET sex in this story. It was just a plan to add more kinky sex later but I have loads of strange sex practices and don't really need it, and yes he can make babies without doing the nasty.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
You wonderful man you!. I hope you have something evil happen to Craig while he's in jail. Do you think you might have Jennifer find out about Brian being a vampire soon? I hope so. Maybe Jennifer can even fall in love with a vampire? That would be interesting to read. I was also wondering if maybe you can have Molly embrace with one of the powerful vampires later on? That would be soooo cool. I love this story. When can we expect the next masterpiece chapter? I hope soon, but I also hope I'm not annoying you by asking you each time. I just love your story so much and I stand by my opinion about you writing gay fiction novels and getting published. You should especially try the mythical stories with vampires and other mythical creatures. I look forward to your next wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: I'm going to go to bed tonight and write the next one tomorrow. The boys are slowing introducing Jennifer to the coven. molly already knows she wants a vampire; children are very perceptive. Craig is sooooo f***Ked. Jennifer is a purple blood too and she will be the hit of the vampire ball! Kittie wants to get scratched. nite nite :P
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
2230 reads in just over two days! (does happy dance in his office) I have to sleep now, next chappie tomorrow. ~JTSecrets
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