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Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
I like how you've structured the laws of vampireland (so to speak). I like the rules of engagement or agreement between the werewolves, vampires and human cops in dealing with the criminal element among their kinds. Appreciate how Craig's life just disappeared, and that Jen & Molly are taken care of. Can't wait to sit in on the meeting between Jen & Deb! Also a fitting end (although ewww!) for Ethan and his maker. Tough justice, but necessary. I still think that Justin's purple blood, since it is so pure & rare, could infuse Brian with powers not known of previously...maybe Sunshine's blood would warm up Brian's body or give him the ability to go out in the sun? Love this story!!! On to the next...
Author's Response: Justin's blood enhances Brian's existing powers. Thanks for reading and reviewing so often.
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
I can see Craig as a sicko perv. Great story line. I wish my boyfriend has this the tongue in this chapter :P
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
Hi, just rating your chapters. Sorry for forgettng.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
Oh my god, that was a ****ing fantastic chapter. I love that Ethan was stupid enough to go after Justin's sister. ****in idiot. I can't wait until Justin is a powerful embraced. He's going to be a force to be reckoned with. MORE MORE MORE!! How soon can we expect another? I love you, you great author you!
Author's Response: I was posting # 6 as you review me. Plot development this time; a break in the smut.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
This is some freaky story. And I"m loving it!
Author's Response: I tried to write Russian to the last reviewer but it didn't take. I was saying thank you very much! Welcome to my crazy world Gina Marie. I'm a gay male writer from the old school of being gay and have decades of experiences to use for my stories. I only write one story at a time and belt out chapters fast! Hope you enjoy the ride and hang on because I plan to pound my readers into the mental mattess!
Reviewer: Olga (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
I'm a big fan of this story from Moscow, Russia. It's an truly amazing tale, I'm enjoying this so much. I've never read anything like this in QAF fandon. Thank you for the brilliant updates.
Author's Response: h1;l6;l3;nm6;l6;k l9;l7;k2;l9;l0;k3;l6;! I'm so happy you like it. More steamy love to follow.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
I often get email comments on my stories. This one really touched me so I want to share it. " I have been reading QAF fan-fic for a couple of years now and I have to tell you that your story is the most amazingly erotic tale I have ever read. Please do keep writing it, I don't know why but I'm sure I'm amoung many who will find this completely compelling. I've never written to anyone that I felt their story was erotic and I never expected to but I am delighted to be able to because it is such a pleasure. Thank-you so much for writing it. Love from (name omited)" United Kingdom
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