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Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

Reposting last entry because I messed up on the grammar in my answer:

'Damn my copy/paste failed.

Sorry Anonomous but I'm glad you posted a review and thanks for your interest. I messed up taking it down. I'm very sorry for that.

Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

I liked the introduction of the coven.  Ethan?  Hmmm...  I'm glad that you included Vic as the Liberty Avenue patriarch.  I thought he was so under utilized on the show.  Spicy ending for our boys!    On to the next...



Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

I like how justin just moved right in. In this chapter I see Ethan as bad news. Good details.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

Hi, just rating your chapters. Sorry for forgettng.

Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

He is only 10 inches in this chapter. I think he was 9 to start. Must be a way to expand Justin whoriizen>)

Author's Response: Clever boi !

Reviewer: Muse (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

I see Brian has 10 inches here and lots more later; hum.......does art imitate life? Is this how a top breaks in a new boy with bigger equipment?

Author's Response: It depends on the virgin and if it's a vampire or not. Thanks for reviewing online Muse.

Reviewer: um (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

whipping = striking or beating

whiping = cleaning



Author's Response: guilty

Reviewer: GoddessMoonLady (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

That... WAS HOTT!! *grin* This is absolutely delicious! lol! I am seriously loving this fic so far! PLEEEASSSE tell me Ethen keeps going after Justin so he can get what he deserves! Please! *smirk* I like the idea of the little shit getting his immortal ass butchered. *snicker* More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Ethen will be stupid.

Reviewer: Joey (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

I enjoyed reading the 3 chapters. I love how addicted B and J are to each other.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Sorry not to have answered you sooner. Another chapter is posted and once I've answered all reviews I'll write the next one tonight.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

wild and crazy things going on at the loft.

justin is most powerful, i don't think ethan is going to let that pass.



Author's Response: Forgive me for not answering your review sooner. Brian has many talents to please his trell boy. Ethan will be so sorry for ever meeting Justin very soon.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven

Oh my god! You are a fabulous man! I loved it! MORE MORE MORE! Tell your man that I love him too, for sharing you with us, your readers. Also, thank him for giving you so much loving to fill your stories. I hope to read more soon.

Author's Response: I've been up for two days and have to crash soon. After about 16 hours sleep, I'll be at it again. Thanks for loving the story.

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