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Reviewer: black-rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I can't believe it's over. Everyday I would come home hoping to see another chapter posted. You are very talented and I hope you continue to write more stories in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting black-rose; I appreciate you taking the time to let me know.
Reviewer: SleepyBard (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I haven't started reading yet, I've been browsing through the reviews first. I'm a little trepident to read a vampire fic, since lately all vamp fanfic seems to be ripped from that Twilight series but this fic is getting such positive reviews so I'm gonna go ahead and read and suspend all judgement.
I have a feeling though that it's gonna be amazing and I'm gonna regret not having found this fic sooner!! :D
-Bard
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting SleepyBard. Over 500 steady readers enjoy the story now. Most of the vampire details are my own. The Cullens of Twilight do make an appearance later however it does not dominate the story. I'm looking forward to hear from you again as you read.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
hilarious. it would be a great twist if daniel and angela hit it off. looking forward to reading whatever you dream up... :-DD
Author's Response: Thanks alys for your comment. We'll have to see how it goes.
Reviewer: Tanya (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I just wanted to know how many more chapters there are. I stopped reading at 90, I want to read the rest all together. I am really enjoying this but,I just needed a break for a bit.
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment Tanya. I'm expecting the story to go to 110 chapters total. As fast as I write, and I only write one novel at a time, it won't be long until I write them.
Reviewer: FEROZA (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
HAPPY BRTHDAY!
Author's Response: Thank you FEROZA!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
loved the NY crowd coming for a Pitts visit. Baby Gus cat in the forest was a great storyline.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Vikinglass24 deserves credit for Gus in the forest. She has great ideas to add to the story.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
A great chapter. That both Justin and Brian learned something is the best. As the saying goes it takes 2 to tango, it takes 2 to make or break a relationship. I felt Dracula was very fair in the secrecy about the whole trial. Those there can support B&J, but B&J will not be shamed by the event, nor will other Vam/Embraced couples expect a 2nd chance either. I look forward to seeing just how their lives change. Loved the visual of big blond kittie sleeping the night away.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing alys. Brian suffered much more than Justin did that week. Their love will be far greater now for this experience. A kitty Justin is so adorable!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
loved catching up on the last couple of chapters. Loved the cat scenes. Also loved the Cullens so watched the moved. Just got their books. Can't wait to see how you use them more. I think training will be good for Justin. Its necessary as yourself and many reviewers have mentioned. Look forward to reading abt the training, sounds like you've had 1st hand experience here. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Working on the next chapter now. Brian begins the training slowly and makes Justin do some serious thinking. I really appreciate you taking the time to review alys. RL has me a bit busy but should have a new chapter completed and posted within 48 hours at the most.
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Oh yes darlin the MFM was realistic, especially to those of us blessed to have sampled it. I really, really, admire your writing style and wait in eager anticipation for the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review Carlly. It means a lot to me and I hope to hear from you again. I stayed up to make the next chapter so you didn't have to wait!
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Brian drank from legendary DRACULA. That's impresive!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing monica. More interesting vampires are going to show up next chapter.
Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Hullo luv. I've been away for a minute and just finished reading 15 chapters. I had to change my panties twice. Thanks for letting us girls get some too! And how dare you leave us hanging; need more more more!!!!!
Author's Response: So my straight sex scene was realistic? Two panties is quite a compliment to a budding young smut writer as myself. Next chapter real soon. Thanks so much for reviewing and if you love me; hit me again became reviews are like sex for me; I can't get enough~!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Loved ch36. Cute how the young ones are, just hard to read as Molly is 13 not 16. Glad Justin was able to take Jen's mind of the kids upstairs with thought of a grandchild. A wonderful chapter and story.
Author's Response: Congrads on being my 300th reviewer. Molly and Kelly are legally underage so they don't break the law. I'm in my fifties and can remember that 35 years ago several states allowed girls to marry at 12 with parental consent and many more states at 14. I'm glad you like the story and thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Oooh, a vampire epic featuring B/J, rubbing my hands in delight! I am intrgued by the premise. Off to read more... kdg
Author's Response: It has been very well received and popular beyond my wildest dreams; please enjoy the story.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Excellant ch29. Love how close the community is, Ellen D. ;-) can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much alys. I'll get up the next chapter tomorrow; me getting sleepy now.
Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
That was so hot. On to next now.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
very erotic and this was just the frist chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you sub; I very much value your opinion. Enjoy the ride; Justin does!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Just caught up on the last 2 chapters, boys in NY and Mickie's end. The NY storyline is excellant, I can't wait to see what new twist happen because of the boys new friends. Very HOT chapter. An apt if gory end for Mickie. Very graphic. Hopefully this is really the end for him.... don't see any more twists with him. I love reading between the lines and seeing what is coming. I agree w/ moonshadown women.... rather you exceed S.King, he's too predictable that's why I stopped reading him long ago. Loving your stories. Hug the partner if thanks for sharing you with us! A few hours sleep too.... I'll try to wait patiently ;-) A.
Author's Response: That's definitely the end of Michael. Writing the next chapter after catching up on answering reviews. Muse is on the Soloflex gym right now clanging away. Hug delivered with a kiss. He likes this story too and helps with kinky sex scene ideas. I didn't know he had such a naughty streak in him. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
UH, I LOVE IT!!!!!!IT'S HOT AND STEAMY!!! MMMMMMM :-) i love your naughty imagination ;-)
Author's Response: I must have been a nympo in a prior lifetime :P Thanks for reviewing,
Reviewer: ali (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Just wanted to let you no that i'm loving your story, it's the first vampire fic i've read, not really been interested in them before but yours has me hooked!! The sex is hot and the death scene of Micheal graphic .........great writing!!! can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review. I hope to get better the more I write. :)
Reviewer: Tonya (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Just read all the chapters and have to say....WOW. This is a very good vampire fic, I usually stay away from these fics but yours is too good to stop. I am so anti Michael it's ridiculous, I need and want him dead. I also can't shake the feeling that you have some shocks, surprises or something cooking in the background. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I promise an interesting read. I won't do anything stupid like kill Brian or sometime. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Hi, just rating your chapters. Sorry for forgettng.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Whoa that was hottt.i see michael is being his usual whining arrogant self . I am totally loving this story.Can't wait for the next few chapters.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
WOW! Great imagination, skip the beta want the chapters fast. Agree with so many of your fans you've a great imagination many of us would love to be embraced, until then we'll live vicariuosly though your imagination and story.... thanks for the towel warnings ;-) LOL
Author's Response: Thank you! I could waste hours finding little stuff. Most B/J to cum.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I'm doing excellent you lovely man you. Sorry to be pushing so much but I just love your stories, especially vampire ones, so much. Look forward to reading more and don't push yourself to hard. I don't want to lose one of my favorite authors. XOXOXOXO
Author's Response: I should post the next chapter in about two hours. I love you too and please drive up my reviews so I look good to the scanning readers.
Reviewer: Ash (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Awesome chapter, I saw the warnings/summary and you have added het sex. Is that with Brian or Justin? I am not into reading about that and it would be a shame for me to have to stop reading so thought I would ask first, cheers
Author's Response: Way into the future Justin's seed is very important for the blond haired, blue eyed race. 99.9% is gay sex in my story. And when Justin makes babies, Brian will be behind him driving him to success! OOPS! Spoiler alert!
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