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Reviewer: lili (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

my dear .......

today i read some of your storei agin and i read this story again and again

you promised to continue this nice story to another way please countine it



Author's Response: I really do mean to get back to this I'm just overwhelmed with writing, but this is my baby I really should work on it. Thanks for the reminder ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: S-R (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

HI DARLING..... TANNKS FOR YOUR ANSWER ........ YOU WANT WRITING ANOTHER STORY ABOUT MCKINNY BUT I LOVE THIS STORY BEACUSE IT IS SERUS AND CHARACTER OF BRIAN IS VERY BOLD PKEASE COUNTINU THIS STORY AND DO NOT CHANGE CHARACTER



Author's Response: Oh yeah I'll be continuing this story and don't worry about me changing his character, he's not Brian... But Brian is him... The big idea is that him and Jonah have to deal with all the homophobic puritans of the time. Something happens and for the next 80 - 100 years they keep getting reborn for a new chance at love and finally make it with Brian and Justin; only Brian is totally fucked up and carries all of Brett's pain and guilt over Jonah's death... I even plan to continue it into Einstein's string theory maybe... Thanks so much for reading I truly appreciate it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

HI DEAR

WOW......I am very glad beacuse you want countinue this story  in here i can not wait for read this story go ahead and give us alot of chapter

have a nice time kiss yoy



Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, I seem to be having writers block so I haven't updated recently but I will... Sorry to make you wait so long... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LiLi (Anonymous) · Date: October 07, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

hi kathleen .... i agree to sara ........ i think you countinu this story in here ... i follow all of your story and i end of this story

 kiss you



Author's Response: Hi LiLi, I really am going to start working on McKinney again, I have to many stories going to once. But I I'm writing a Brian/Justin - McKinney crossover for Halloween and that should be fun... Thanks for commenting I really do appreciate it even if I don't response right away... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

HI DARLING....... I READ YOUR STORY ,IT IS VERY VERY NICE BUT YOU DO NOT COUNTINU AND I WANT MORE.

I KNOW , YOU WANT IT A NOVEL BUT I  OR  ANOTER PERSON DO NOT LIVE IN USA AND WE CAN NOT BUY IT ......... PLEASE COUNTINU THIS STORY IN HERE

THANK FUL



Author's Response: I know, I know I should continue it... I'll have to give it some thought. I'm so glad you're enjoying reading it, that makes me happy... : ) Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jina (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

ilove this story i want mor iwant more



Author's Response: I've sent all of parts of the series off to my Beta Queen for feedback... I'm considering trying to get published and McKinney seems like the one story of mine that could actually become a real novel, and not qaf related if the city, names and personality changes. So that's why I haven't posted and I'm not sure if I should just take it down... The Truth is I'm confused about what to do and slightly insecure in my writing, but my sister says to try and get published... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jina (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

please....... this story is very beautiful .....      i love it ...... i want more..... countinueeeeeeeeeeeeee  pleasssssssssssssssssssss



Author's Response: Thank You, Thank You, Thank You... I'm Smiling my Big Sunshine Smile :) Later Baby ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jemy (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

Chapter 11? 12? maybe 13? I hope you update soon! Jemy



Author's Response:

I sorry I got caught up with where I was and then wrote a chapter, and then started updated other fics... I'll work on it and hopefully post this weekend, I just found someone to beta my stories so now it takes a little longer. But hopefully with less grammar police hovering... Sorry baby thanks for being patient...

Later Kathleen

PS Thanks I needed the push...

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 01:12 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

I'm glad he has Jonah and Lara, his family is nasty and vindictive.

Marshall needs to grow up and realize that some people mature when they get older.

I hope that if Lara needs to have an heir for Brett they use a turkey baster not a natural method.


Do you have pictures with this story, because on my computer there a lot of empty boxes in the story but no pictures.

Beautiful writing.
Love the heat in the woods.

Author's Response:

Now that they're back in Pittsburgh things can start to develop as you can see I'm bringing in a few friends...

I checked the code here on Midnight Whispers and it looks OK... maybe its because of the I-phone thing? Yes I tend to love to put lots of pics in my fics... and you really have to see the pic of McKinney that my friend Vonnie ~ Yvonnereid made its just perfect... I listed my livejournal address so you can hopefully see the pics from the website...

Later Baby ~ Kathleen

http://7wildwaysup.livejournal.com/

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

Sorry I haven't commented in the last couple of days, I had to read from my iphone and can't leave comments from it.

Jonah and Lara have a strange and funny relationship. I'm glad that Lara is not jealous of Jonah the way Lindsey became of Justin near the end of the series.

Getting Jonah fitted for clothes sure gets hot.

Love the story.

Author's Response:

Lara and Jonah will develop a very close friendship over the years and be very supportive of one another.

Brett and Micah will also become very close confidents as she studies law and works for Brett over the years.

Yes we did have fun at the tailors didn't we... ha, ha, ha So glad your still enjoying McKinney...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

i like how you bought marshall, eli, and thaddeus with bailey into the story. they all seem so familiar lol.

brett is training him well. can't wait to see what happens at the new house they build. will lara be staying with her over the law offices or will she be moving with them?



Author's Response:

Yeah there is something vaguely familiar going on here... How did you like that I made Debbie and Vic run a whorehouse? ha,ha,ha

Jonah training is coming along very well... he's such a dedicated student...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

well it seems things are going along wonderfully. lara met someone to keep her company at night when brett and jonah aren't available.

sad to hear about his father. glad the other men now know just what kind of relationship brett and jonah have.



Author's Response:

Ah yes things are definitely moving along now that their going home to Pittsburgh, and we now that we have the basic back story all setup.

I'm so glad your still enjoying this story and I do appreciate the feedback.

Later Baby ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

Thank you sooo much indeed !! 



Author's Response:

No, thank you sooo much... I'll try not to fall down on the job from now on...

I loved waking up to your email... it makes me so happy to know that your enjoying my story...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

I like the background story.

His mother and sisters seem odd.

It seems like he wanted Justin to lose his virginity in front of an audience the same way he did (without the sharing part).

I love his father's reaction to it.

Great story.

Author's Response:

I know I did write his family with a lot of bitter resentment... I was just setting things up for the big family fight to come...

Eventually dividing the family and shortening their name to Kinney... and yeah your right Brett has always been a bit of an exhibitionist...

Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

smart man. i like finding out his background.



Author's Response:

I figured that a little back story would help since their moving back to Pittsburgh... and will soon start to build Britin...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

 

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

I just love this story so much.

Can't wait for the honeymoon.

Author's Response:

I just love, that you love this story so much...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jemy (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

I love this story! the characters are perfect, especially jonah so perv and shy... very good, jemy



Author's Response:

Thanks so much I'm glad your enjoying how I'm portraying them, and giving them a back story...

Later Baby ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

okay, i'm a bit comfused. in the last chapter you made it seem that brett was marrying lara not jonah.  you made it seem that with brett's age it was time for him to take a wife and have a child. why would you have a 15 year old marry a woman 21?

the wedding night was so hot. i can see jonah if the future with his lace stockings and lip stick all over brett. from head to cock. would be very hot to picture jonah dressed in drag.



Author's Response:

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Brett and Jonah are a couple and would have had a wedding with or without Lara coming into their lives. Jonah's parents and community are very liberal and accepting of alternative lifestyles.

For the sake of Brett's public appearances and dealing with his research and politics he agreed to go along with pretending to marry Lara to give them both a cover for outside appearances. I know it was pretty silly for anyone to actually think Lara and Jonah were marrying… 

So glad love liked the commitment ceremony I had fun writing that, but also know I’m pushing the envelope…   and some may be offended…

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Thanks for reading I do appreciate the feedback, didn't mean to be confusing... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

You make it easy to feel what they are feeling. You're really good. I can't wait for the wedding night.

Author's Response:

You know I've been told that I write with a unique style, usually giving both perspectives or internal thoughts... as I've said before, I've never written anything before I started writing qaf fanfics last August; at first I thought : I have a style? ha, ha, ha...

I don't even think I write these, they write themselves, I'm just channeling their love and passion... So it always surprises me when people write such wonderful and kind words... Thanks so much... I'm bouncing and clapping... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

things are starting to come together. brett gets a wife as cover whom prefers women. what more can he ask for.

i can't wait for their wedding night. should be quite interesting.



Author's Response:

Yeah... this next one was the chapter I was sure the internet police were going to come and arrest me...

Then I started writing the Stuck In's and it turns out were all porn-whores... ha,ha,ha

I'm so glad your enjoying my deep dark fantasy... Later Baby ~ Kathleem

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

jonah has what is needed for his 'lessons' to begin.



Author's Response:

Yes his toy chest is filling up and his Master is getting ready to play...

 

Later Baby ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

This just gets better and better.
I've been checking every couple of hours hoping for an update.

Author's Response:

Oh thanks that's so sweet, I'm glad you like it.

I planning on posting a chapter a day until I get caught up; about 4 or 5 more chapters, then I need to really start re-writing and merging. I do plan on posting more of my "Stuck In's" a series of little porn ficlets...

I see you list JTSecrets as one of your favorite authors; I just started reading Embraced and love it... I had to email a few fangirls about it and confess I might have competition for my crown. ha, ha, ha

Thanks for commenting it's always great to met new people. Later Baby ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

The age difference is not that much. Also, a 14, almost 15 year old then is not the same as now. You grew up faster and did not live as long. I love this.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you understand where I was coming from. I know that for some this little fact is something they view as...

Well... I keep checking to see if the internet police as lurking around each corner...

Thanks for reading and commenting on my stories it really means alot to me...

 

Thanks Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

That's just brilliant. Can't wait to read the rest ! Keep going !



Author's Response:

Oh thanks so much it always makes me happy to know others enjoy my writing; I have a tendency to push the envelope a bit...

Later ~ Kathleen

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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Brett Aidan McKinney

Very hot chapter.

Author's Response:

Well they didn't crown me Mistress Kathleen ~ Goddess of Porn on livejournal for nothing...

Sorry... Just smack me... or should I say spank?

Later Baby ~ Kathleen

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